Workshopping in Poetry Town

Poet George Bilgere has started a website called Poetry Town with a daily poem and a brief answer by him about "Why I Chose This Poem."  There are other daily poem sites but I subscribed in the hope of discovering new poems and poets.

That was the case with this poem and poet, both of which were new to me. I just did a poetry workshop, so the poem resonated.

"Fellow poets, it’s summer, which means it’s poetry workshop time. Many of you are at one of the many writing workshops scattered here and there around the country. A magical time! Some of the happiest summers of my life have been spent at these wondrous retreats from daily reality. And you’re going through exactly what Norman Stock describes so memorably in this poem. But fear not! Cocktail hour is at 7 p.m., down by the lake. Casual attire!"

Every workshop has its tools

Thank You for the Helpful Comments 
by Norman Stock, from Buying Breakfast for My Kamikaze Pilot

I sit quietly listening
as they tear my poem to shreds in the poetry workshop,
as each one says they have a “problem” with this line
and they have a “problem” with that line
and I am not allowed to speak
because that is the etiquette of the workshop
so I sit listening and writhing
while they tear the guts out of my poem
and leave it lying bleeding and dead,
and when they’re finally finished
having kicked the stuffing out of it,
having trimmed it down from twenty lines
to about four words that nobody objects to,
then they turn to me politely
and they say, well, Norman
do you have any response.

Response, I say,
picking myself up off the floor
and brushing away the dirt,
while holding on for dear life
to what I thought was my immortal poem
now dwindled to nothing,
and though what I really want to say is
can I get my money back for this stupid workshop,

what I say instead is…uh…thank you
for your helpful comments…while I mumble
under my breath, motherfuckers
wait till I get to your poems.

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