October 15, 2023

Conversations About Poetry

"Tell all the truth but tell it slant" wrote Emily Dickinson. I have heard recited it or read it many times, but I realized that I'm still not really sure I understand it completely.

Tell all the truth but tell it slant —
Success in Circuit lies
Too bright for our infirm Delight
The Truth’s superb surprise
As Lightning to the Children eased
With explanation kind
The Truth must dazzle gradually
Or every man be blind —

Maybe that's the thing about good poems - that as much as you like hearing them and getting some meaning from them, they offer you the chance to revisit them and get even more from them.

I enjoy having conversations about poetry. You could post a comment about Emily's little poem on this post.

Poets Online has been a website asking you to write to a prompt since 1998. I enjoy receiving and reading poems submitted and occasionally I develop an email connection with a poet. I know a few poets who have written on the site in real life, and just a few times someone has approached me at a reading to introduce themself as one of the poets published on the site. But that is the rare exception.


In 2005, I started this blog and added Poets Online to Facebook, Twitter and Pinterest - not so much as promotion, but so that readers could connect with me. It happens sometimes, but not often.

There is also a Poets Online discussion group on Facebook where people sometimes post poems they have written, or ones that touch them, or links to things poetic. 

Twitter is not as good at conversations (and has a tarnished reputation since I entered us there in 2005) but it still has value. 

I hope you will join the conversation.

2 comments:

  1. Tell the truth but don't merely transcribe day-to-day life. The truth is powerful - perhaps too powerful at times. Circle it - "dazzle gradually" - before the fear, awe and lightning hits.

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    1. I'm intrigued by the logical structure of the poem. I see it two main parts of four lines each. The first two lines begin with an injunction: "Tell all the truth" immediately qualified: "but tell it slant." Then something in the way of justification: the truth told directly is "too bright," for us, its "superb surprise" too much for us in our infirmity or weakness. Best therefore to approach it circuitously. Taken together, they make a tight argument about what to do with the truth.

      The last four lines restating the case are built upon a simile: "It's like this,: Dickinson suggests: In the same way we give children simplified explanations for lightning because the truth might be too complex (or perhaps too terrifying), we should approach Truth obliquely, less it blind us, or those to whom we are trying to share it.

      It's a cautionary poem. It's hard for me to read it without thinking of Jack Nicholson's in A Few Good Men: "You want the truth? You can't handle the truth." Nicholson, of course, had his own not-so-good reasons for wanting to keep the truth hidden. Dickinson chooses to end her poem by suggesting that approaching the truth obliquely is less an act of duplicity than an act of charity, or as she suggests, simple kindness: we should be careful with the truth in order not to blind one another.

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